You have shown your ideas clearly through this pitch but it hasn't shown the song you are making the music video for and it doesn't explain the story behind what the video will be about. Good work though.
I believe you have produced and interesting pitch and I look forward to see your final video. You have clearly promoted that the video will be mainly performance based. As Ollie is a drummer himself, I am intrigued to see whether or not you decide to use his talent within your video.
I can see you have put forward a good idea and you have shown what kind of idea you are going for clearly. I can tell exactly what genre you are going for as well as the song and artists. Also through the use of the pictures I can see where you have got some inspiration from.
The basis for the video is apparent however it does lack in detail and depth. The idea is good and effective and will definitely suit the audience you are aiming it at. The story of the video isn't clear from the 25 word pitch.
Pitch contains some good ideas but doesn't include what song you have chosen or what the story behind the video will be.
ReplyDeleteYou have shown your ideas clearly through this pitch but it hasn't shown the song you are making the music video for and it doesn't explain the story behind what the video will be about. Good work though.
ReplyDeleteI believe you have produced and interesting pitch and I look forward to see your final video. You have clearly promoted that the video will be mainly performance based. As Ollie is a drummer himself, I am intrigued to see whether or not you decide to use his talent within your video.
ReplyDeleteI can see you have put forward a good idea and you have shown what kind of idea you are going for clearly. I can tell exactly what genre you are going for as well as the song and artists. Also through the use of the pictures I can see where you have got some inspiration from.
ReplyDeleteThe basis for the video is apparent however it does lack in detail and depth. The idea is good and effective and will definitely suit the audience you are aiming it at. The story of the video isn't clear from the 25 word pitch.
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