Peer Feedback for Video Draft A.R.

Peer Feedback for Our Video Draft

Sanjay Patel -

"Hi Alex!
For a draft, your work is at a very high standard. It is clear that you and Will have put lots of effort in to be successful!Changes needed -

Focus the camera to ensure that the video looks professional.

Ensure that the band look enthusiastic!

And have some more focus on your band members (Derry) "

This was the email we received from Sanjay Patel for our music video draft. From these comments we were able to see that we need to either use another camera (which we later  do and experiment with), or to learn how to use the camera that we were using at the time so that we can get the best video possible. As the song is a fast pace, up tempo song, the feedback that the band should look more enthusiastic was taken on board which is why we believe that for our final video will need to have the band looking more enthusiastic to create more tempo in the song. In addition to this we will need to add more focus on the lead people / instruments in the band, such as the drums and the singer.

Chloe Phillips - 

"This is a good video to have produced for your draft. obviously i can see you haven't got all the shots you wanted yet and i would encourage that you change your piano player, as he doesn't look the part, maybe even a new drummer too that can play in time with the sounds. I would even go to say that maybe not include shots of audience because the band look the part and would look good on their own being filmed. well done looking forward to your final product."

From this feedback we have decided that we are going to have to alter the band around, especially for the drummer as they are very influential in the song so there will be a lot of focus on them, which means that they will need to be in sync with the song. We will have to ensure that we use an actual drummer so that they will have the correct rhythm for the song. For our final video we are going to film the band on the stage and on the stage only instead of including audience shots. This is because we believe it will be too difficult to create a realistic setting and rely on people turning up.